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Dark Glasses: Darkness in the Sunshine

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:iconargentinianplz: Español:

¡SÍ! ¡POR FIN TERMINÉ! (la tapa, ojo, todavía no terminé la historieta :XD: ). Empecé a probar las distintas funciones de Photoshop (Licuar, Degradado, etc.) Y parece que salió bien. :|
¡Admito tu crítica! :D Así que: 
*¿Qué pensás de los personajes? :O
*¿Te gusta el estilo? :dummy:
*¿Acaso esta tapa te atrapa? :la:

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:iconisayplz: English:

YES! FINALLY I FINISHED IT! (hey, just the cover I didn't finish the comic yet :XD: ) I started to test the different Photoshop's functions. And it looks like it turned out well. :|
I accept your critique! :D So:
*What do you think about the characters? :O
*Do you like the style? :dummy:
*Does this cover, somewhat, catch you? :la:
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The characters don't really interest me. (Probably cause I'm not into whatever this is.) The style is eye-catching due to the strong contrasts of black and white. (But again, not to my personal preference.)

Okay, now for some worthy(?) feedback. The cover is interesting, mostly for the reason I already stated about the style/contrast. The composition is a bit weak in my opinion. My eyes keep moving to the left following the swirls/lines. (This would be good if the next page to read is directly on the left I guess.) The far right is so empty in comparison. The text is also heavy on the left side (the D is right near the border while the S is so far away in comparison.) The subtitle/chapter name might make things look balanced if it's shifted to the right.

A minor complaint I have is how the text seems...tilted? Being hand drawn/written, I understand it won't be perfectly lined up. But since this is under digital art, you should be able to easily fix it.